The comments I got from music video was pretty constructive, which I found quite useful. Although I do quite like the idea I had pitched to the class they thought I should go in a different direction.
Here are a few commonets I received:
"The storyline is practical with a few problems that can be easily overcomed"
I agree with this comment I tried to make a storyline that I knew would be possible to shoot without having many problems anpart from the weather.
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"Need more loactions"
I agree with this as well in my pitch I had only showed two locations because I hadn't thought of any others yet.
"How is it different to other videos"
It wasn't going to be much different to other videos because I was trying to conform to dubstep videos that tell a story.
"The editing needs to be fast paced to match the song"
When I start my editing I will deffinatly cut the shots together to make it more fast paced.
"Does the storyline match the song?"
Quite a few people in the class said the same thing in their feedback, I personally thought it did match the storyline because there are very few words in the song which are:
Innocence...you'll never be mine.
I got my storyline form this because the main character is trying to get a girl that he'll never get because when he does he gets beaten up.
"You could be more adventurous with the story"
Yes I was thinking the same thing, but I was thinking more practically when I came up with this idea. So shooting the shots for my storyline I knew were certainly possible. I didn't want to make an amazing storyline that I wouldn't be able to shoot.
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