Animatic Comments

After showing my class the animatic about my music video they gave me some feedback to help me make it better.
Comments:
"At the end it could be a concert instead of a chicken"
I thought this was a good idea because of  the genre of the music is something people you listen to both dub-step and drum and bass the audiences are usually party goers. The only problem I had was most people don't arrive at parties or club by bike.

"More close ups"
I like the idea of having a few more close ups because it might help  show the audience the determination of the riders to get to the shop before it closes.

"Could show Marble Arch at night"
I had shown in the animatic us in Marble Arch but it was during the day. At night I think it could look pretty good because the lights on Marble Arch will be lit up in the back ground. To add to this they were saying we could add the glow lights to the spokes of our wheels i thought that to could look quite cool so I may try and get some depending on the price.

"Show poster at start"
At the start of the video someone was saying I should show a poster advertising the free food. I thought this idea made sense as it shows were the boys are going, so this is something I plan to include.