Music VIdeo Pitch Feedback

The comments I got from music video was pretty constructive, which I found quite useful. Although I do quite like the idea I had pitched to the class they thought I should go in a different direction.
Here are a few commonets I received:

"The storyline is practical with a few problems that can be easily overcomed"
I agree with this comment I tried to make a storyline that I knew would be possible to shoot without having many problems anpart from the weather.
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"Need more loactions"
I agree with this as well in my pitch I had only showed two locations because I hadn't thought of any others yet.

"How is it different to other videos"
It wasn't going to be much different to other videos because I was trying to conform to dubstep videos that tell a story.

"The editing needs to be fast paced to match the song"
When I start my editing I will deffinatly cut the shots together to make it more fast paced.

"Does the storyline match the song?"
Quite a few people in the class said the same thing in their feedback, I personally thought it did match the storyline because there are very few words in the song which are:
Innocence...you'll never be mine.
I got my storyline form this because the main character is trying to get a girl that he'll never get because when he does he gets beaten up.

"You could be more adventurous with the story"
Yes I was thinking the same thing, but I was thinking more practically when I came up with this idea. So shooting the shots for my storyline I knew were certainly possible. I didn't want to make an amazing storyline that I wouldn't be able to shoot.

Music Video Concept IDea

Follow the link to a prezi I made about my music video:

http://prezi.com/vghn2nojuyub/music-video-pitch/

Thanks

MoodBoard

This is a mood board for my music video. It is supposed to create a theme for music video allowing people to get feel for what my video will be about. It has different aspects of the video I will try to include, for example it has the man on his bike having a good time. This is because I want my video to be montage of a couple of my mates and I having a good time on bikes attempting to do tricks. The tools and tool kit are a representation of us fixing our bikes when they have a problem. The image of people in the park is because that is were my mates and I would usualy go riding.

My Audience

The genre of music I might choose for music video would be Drum & Bass for example:
Plan B - Love goes down (Doctor P remix)

My Audience Cage:

Class       - Lower & Middle Class
Age         - Between 16 to 24
Gender    - Both Male and Female
Ethnicity  - Mostly White with people from others as well.

• My audience are most likely to be party goers and often like to go out and have a good time.
• There method of transport would mostly be public transport or bicycles.

• They live with there parents or are at university.
• Prefered music: Drum & Bass, Dubstep and Jungle.
• On the tv they may watch programmes like skins or misfits.
• Most of the audience might live in london, but also aound the UK and America.
• Holiday locations they would go to innovation(drum & bass week in spain) or Maguluf.
• They like to eat chinease and most fast food.

Reception Theory

Today we made comics to show our understanding of reception theory, tohave a look at mine follow my link:

http://Pixton.com/ic:4efhar4c

My video is DJ Fresh-Loader

Follow the link below to see the video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eE-dwpWpscU&safe=active

One thing I like in the video is all the different bright colors as it makes you feel good and ready for summer.
The main resaon I like it is because of the theame of the video, I like all of the skating and tricks they do.

Evaluation Question 7



I have learnt various things from my preliminary task which came to quite useful in the making of my movie opening. For example when making this prelim task was the first time I had used the the titles. Once I had figured out how to do it I found it quite easy to do different things with them like roll and scroll. I was able to use the things learnt in my prelim task in my movie opening to make my titles look pretty good. I liked the way we added a gradient to the movie name to make it look like knives that have just stabbed someone. I was able to use different shots in my prelim task which I used in my movie opening for example an establishing shot. In my movie opening it was a long shot that showed the main character and the surrounding area, my prelim task showed me it was a good way to set the seen allowing the audience to see the location. Also I learnt from the editing of my prelim task because I was able to cut two scenes together to make it look like a seamless making a match on action.